Moby Monday: Novel rejection letter (video)

Editing advice includes:

1. shortening its “vision-impairing length”
2. adding more “voluptuous maidens”
3. “changing certain of the story’s elements might not buoy its purchases at the shop, as it were? First, we must ask, does it have to be a whale?”

Flag dip: The Telegraph – Culture | Books – Famous Rejection Letters – “Amusing Moby Dick rejection letter asks “does it have to be a whale?” December 1, 2016